A monotetra poem

Dartmoor National Park, England Neil Burnell
Kisses that fall as summer rain,
hot, heavy, sudden, lips; arcane,
and just like that, downpours wane,
to seep and drain, to seep and drain,
The soil watered with your grace,
darting buds bend toward your face,
blooming into all open space,
to rush and race, to rush and race,
Tendrils slither around each night,
in times of shadow, crows the wight,
pillows cradle the creeping blight,
spits poisoned spite, spits poisoned spite,
Sickly forest of sullen grey,
till the fire came to cleanse away,
the spectres hex which made me prey,
burn and obey, burn and obey.
© Darius the Mate
Written for dVerse.
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Nice blog
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Thank you so much!
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You created a wonderfully powerful atmosphere here – the beautiful and benign turning into something much darker.
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Thank you so much!
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Wow, Dark, Darius!
This was definitely my favorite line 🙂
❤
David
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Thank you, David
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a beautiful cascade and powerful finale line.
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Thank you so much, Reading Writer
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This one drew a deep, deep sigh from me 😀 I especially love; “The soil watered with your grace, darting buds bend toward your face.”💝💝
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Thank you Sanaa
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Wonderful tale of enchantment. Reminds of some flowers’ perfume that smells good at first and then begins to cloy and sicken.
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Perfect! Just the tone I was aiming for. Thank you Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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There’s such a sensual evocative feel to this, yet it also feels like a haunting dark enchantment. The best hexes tread the fine line of daring to desire that turns daunting and damning. You’ve penned this well.
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Thank you for you kind words Raivenne 🙂
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Very visual!
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Thank you, Jane
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A sweet -sour poem, still shining the light.
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Thank you, Vandana
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Wonderfull to see the change of emotions from sensuality to darkness. The last 2 stanzas stood out for me.
Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you, Grace
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Wow. SUch a turn to darkness. Beautifully accomplished!
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Much gratitude Worms
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Opens with a refreshing rain, and descends into darkness. Well written!
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Thank you Beverly
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Such a wonderfully sensual weave that turns thrillingly dark in the end. Well done! 🌹
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Thank you, Redcat 😈😄
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It feels beautiful, sensual, and it turns chilling with the latter stanzas in this transition. Such beautiful and visceral work.
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Thank you, Lucy ❤️
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