A quadrille poem

Thinking thoughtlessly,
ideas,
often forgotten,
if not jotted -
Slotted,
as gold coins,
Let bygones be bygones,
But,
bygone minds,
live on,
in written word,
Sung,
and heard,
from the jukebox,
of ink and paper,
Exhumed,
when consumed,
Risen,
From the soil,
voices,
Oil,
the cogs.
Written for dVerse Poets Pub.
© Darius the Mate
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Wordplay Pathway
I love how and where you used the word “oil”, Darius 😀
Much love,
David
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I’m glad (and suspicious) that excited you. 🤭
Thanks David
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I find myself asking my 83 yr.old mother many questions of bygone days. They truly need a place to be written and preserved. Loved all the internal rhyme in this piece.
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I love that you loved it, ‘Someone’.
It’s a blessing to be able to just listen, whilst we can.
Thank you for stopping by, and adding a little mystery to my day.
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Well done. Lots of beat to it. Enjoyed.
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Appreciated, Bill!
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Lovely, Darius. Words and music can definitely live on.
I like how oil the cogs can be taken literally and metaphorically.
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Thank you Merril 😊
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You’re welcome!
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beutifully worded. my kids generation wont have these kind of memories. I am sad for them
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Thanks Rog, appreciated greatly.
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Awesome wordplay. Loved the roll of it.
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Thank you Worms ☺️
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Nice link between past and present, between music and poetry!
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Thank you Ingrid.
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I like to swim in the stream of consciousness that has jukebox tunes in it.
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Swimming the stream of consciousness, must be good for mental fitness and dexterity. Thank you for the comment Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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Lovely poem, Darius.
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Thank you Arcadia Maria 🙂.
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The very word struck a chord (pun intended) with everyone. We’re no doubt humming old songs and putting ink to paper as well!
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Thank you for the comment Bev. Puns welcome anytime.
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“But,
bygone minds,
Live on,
In written word,”
… Oh this is incredibly hard-hitting and poignant. A lovely write 💝💝
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Thank you Sanaa 🙂
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Bygone minds live on in written words ~~~ hits hard as I volunteer in Memory Care, wishing these precious souls had kept diaries … recorded their feelings. A spectacular write!
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Thank you Helen ❤️
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Those old tunes do bring back the memories………….I like “bygone minds live on in written word.” I think that is what keeps me penning my poems.
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It’s truly a gift – we get to create and live in words, beyond our mortal shells.
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The jukebox of ink and paper was my favorite part in your poem – it comes alive!
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Thank you Claudia – that line is definitely it’s beating heart.
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I feel this so much. Everything we try to capture with the pen, it unfortunately doesn’t always make it to paper. I also loved these few lines:
“Sung,
and heard,
From the jukebox,
Of ink and paper”
That is a marvelous comparison. I also love the references to memory with oiling the cogs, and how even if we pen down what we can, it’s what we can try to remember from our minds too that is just as important to us. Just my interpretation, but either way, it’s so beautifully written. ❤
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Thank you Lucy – when a poem resonates with you, I know I’ve done a good job! ❤️
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❤ ❤
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I think we do play with the ink and paper (or maybe with words from the cloud for me) … I just wonder who pushes my button…
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Maybe many a finger!
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We can let go and still hold on to good memories, luv the way you poemed the prompt. Nice photo to go with the poem
Happy Monday
Much💜love
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Thank you Gillena 🙏❤️
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Solid.
Heard the rhythm of the voice through out the reading.
the jukebox of ink and paper…this is what we are doing, isnt it.
hit the right buttons and that old familiar rhythm
is sweeping of the cobwebs of our minds
and taking us to other times and maybe even modern,
glad you joined in.
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Thank you Brian.
I very much enjoyed your prompt – and quirky word choice – it got me up think outside of the (juke)box.
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